Why

by MariaJose94   Jul 7, 2008


Why when you give me all your love, I dont feel any love towards you?
Why when I start giving all my love to you, All your love goes away.
Why when you start to forget me, I start missing you?
and Why when I stop missing you and start to forget you...You start missing me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by MariaJose94

    Hey thankss

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like what you're saying here, I just think you could add more emotion and feeling into it, but it's still pretty good. I would just go back and work a little on it. Take care!

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