Comments : Perfection

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexis

    I absolutely love this...
    its incredibly true..
    because we all chase perfection.
    And we never get it.
    5/5 this is a very good poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Stumbling Shaman

    Orright dude, seriously a cool insight. The flip side to the search for perfection is the inevitable process of narrowing down one's options. When we become certain that "this is the only way" we can miss out on a whole lot of variety- when taken in the grand scale of an entire life, that which is known as "the scenic route". The individual gets lost in the whole mechanistic process of a thoroughly logical existence.
    Or something like that. Anyway, I like the poem.
    Matt