Where did i mess up?

by ryan   Jul 8, 2008


Where did i mess up......
I did everything you asked of me
even if it hurt me bad...
i did things that was wrong
and those things made u glad
Your friends hate me..
and that made me hate myself
You took everything away from me
faith,hope,happiness,life
Nothing would help the pain
razors became my bestfriend
friends left me out in the rain
You tried to fix it with a i love you
After i told you the gun was agaist my head
you laid next to me in my bed
Promised me the world
and then left me all cold
to die a lonely death

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sorinity

    Theres just something about how you write. it leaves me speechless. its amazing and i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awesome job. I felt ur emotons , feeling it was deep like the rest.. I love it even though it so sad .. i like how u rite them all. am adding u in my fav. =) wow! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by pending

    This poem is so awesome!!!
    Loved every piece of it!!!
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    This is a really brilliant write, and I'm sorry if this happened to you. If you ever wanna talk, my pm box is always open =)
    keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    Ur poem is very good, i felt some emotions. nice work

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