Comments : Where did i mess up?

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Well I would like to say, your poem is extremly powerful, razorblades i use to consider my best friends. Still do to this day but i am trying to let that go and never let it affect me the way it has been for over three years now. People promising the world... I find it amazing how a person could promise you something and you hold on to it so dearly then in the blink of an eye they are no longer there to keep the promise.

    you have faith, you have hope, you have happiness and you have life. You just need to search for it because it is inside of you deep down in a place you do not go. I have not found my happiness yet but I still search inside myself. Never give up on yourself, people come and go that is how life has been for many many years.

    If you ever feel sad, down or anything I am here to talk whenever, just send me a message if you ever need to talk . <3

  • 16 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    Ur poem is very good, i felt some emotions. nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    This is a really brilliant write, and I'm sorry if this happened to you. If you ever wanna talk, my pm box is always open =)
    keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by pending

    This poem is so awesome!!!
    Loved every piece of it!!!
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Awesome job. I felt ur emotons , feeling it was deep like the rest.. I love it even though it so sad .. i like how u rite them all. am adding u in my fav. =) wow! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sorinity

    Theres just something about how you write. it leaves me speechless. its amazing and i love it!