by Carolina Jul 8, 2008
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
What do you think you're doing? |
by P00ki3B3ar
I really like this one the whole poem flows it practically rolls of your tongue! excellent i think this one is my most favorite of them all! |
by Brittany
I love this. The rhyming flows and isn't forced. I especially love the opening stanza because it just catches you and throws you into the situation. The message is blasted everywhere in society, but somehow reading your poem didn't seem like reading the same old thing. It was interesting and different. |