Im better off without you.

by kristenlynnpoole   Jul 8, 2008


All my life ive
Stumbled but never fallend
ive cracked but never broke..
ive become lonley . but never desperte.
but i todays the day it all came crashing down..
with in a blink of an eye.
the day i met you.
i cracked.
so todays the day . i'll say
"im better off without you"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    If you edit it in a proper way then it'd be a very good poem. Other than grammatical mistakes your poem is real good. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    All my life ive
    Stumbled but never fallend

    [ change the fallend to "fallen"]

    ive cracked but never broke..
    ive become lonley . but never desperte.

    [ desperate** you spelled it wrong loves]

    but i todays the day it all came crashing down..

    [ take i out of this line]

    with in a blink of an eye.
    the day i met you.
    i cracked.
    so todays the day . i'll say
    "im better off without you"

    ^^ last part is fine the way it is.

    good poem hun

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