Unexplainable Love

by Alejandro Parada   Jul 8, 2008


I sit here wishing you were mine
But at the same time
theres people telling me i don't stand a chance
but whenever i see your glance
you drive me crazy
wanting to give you all kind of daisies
you drive me totally insane
you have me at your arms slain
i would love to kiss you in the rain
these feelings for you are so hard to contain
i wish i could tell you i love you
and i would hate to bid the adieu
to get away from the stress somewhere like Peru
trust me everything I'm telling you is true
and i want to ask you
to be with me but if not ill continue to pursue
my dream of being able to wake up to Ur face
there is no possible way to replace
your beautiful eyes looking into mine
everyday you looking so fine
for me there is and never will be a way to define
the way that you always manage to shine
you leave me speechless
i am really glad you said yes
now your skin i can caress
i just don't know how to impress
you or what to say to explain
the way that you always pop into my brain
i cant stop think in bout your beauty
just to taste those tootie fruity
lips sending chills down my spine
got me feeling better than if i just hit a gold mine
you look so fine it should be a crime
give you two years to nine
just me and you away from the drama
seems like i wanna make u my baby mama
i would make u a thousand of these
take you around to all the seas
to see your hair glide in the breeze
modeling looks like your expertise.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Hey........ a great piece....... amazing poem........
    good work keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    It's good, but the other onewas better. It's amazing how you managed to find all of the rhymes in this, but it sounds like at times you put in a word not because it fit but because it rhymed. i dunno.
    However, there was still alot of emotion and i wasnt bored reading it at all.
    I can even see tis girl by the image you made with your words.
    Maybe try just rhyming two lines together rather or each alternating line rather than 5 in a row-but it still worked-im not trying to slam you or anything.

    Aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Woah..This piece is so cool..hahaha..Very Sweet and cute..I loved how they rhyme..

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