When i lost u

by jana   Jul 8, 2008


You were here once
lying in my heart
but now you're gone
i thought i had you
but i was wrong
since you've been gone
nothing is the same
without you im lost
i cant breath i cant laugh
i cant even hear my heart beat
you said you'll be there
and never leave me through
but NO sir you had to break my heart!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well... I liked your poem. May be you can make it better but I really enjoyed it. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow jana, your poem is really touching. I totally loved it.
    5\5

  • 16 years ago

    by jana

    Yah i know ur right i had a boyfrnd who told me that and we broke up

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    I had a friend that had a boyffriend and he said "i'll be with you forever" and the next he broke up with her for some other chick.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jana

    Ok thxx for the comment anyway:)

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