I WAS ALONE IN THE CITY OF BONE

by Noo track to walk   Jul 8, 2008


I was alone
in the city of bone
everyone had gone
no car no horn

there was fear
all near
I had to take care
but my tear
then I clear
and started to stair
a moment later I hear
a voice of bear

I try
not to cry
I thought I had to be brave
and wished someone come to save
I went further
but fine non other

then I feel someone threw something on my face
I woke up in that case
I saw on a shaving cream
and then I knew it was my dream. =)

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  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Lol, Nice rhyming there, A very funny piece indeed!

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    :) Funny ..but please write i as I and thn as Then.Poem should be written with correct spellings as everyone reads it and short forms which we have created mostly cant be understood by others.

    I had fun while reading this poem :)
    5/5
    Cheers
    Biya

  • 16 years ago

    by Nafees Ahmad

    A very good poem, i like it so.......

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow not at all funny.. but in last stanza... it made all the pome funny. lol

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