by StefQ Jul 8, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It's a rainy day, and I just feel the pain, |
by Fsams
This poem is so lovely n touching. I loved the metaphores created using the very apt 'rain' to relate with misery n grief. That was gr8. |
by Alexandraa
I love this . Well done |
The first stanza captured my attention right away. The tale of a lost lover, an amazing poetry plot. I like how your world has becme dark and gray, as if she was your light. Beautiful. 5/5 |
Hey nice one dude...incrediple flow...keep it up...btw... its true... |