Letting you go

by StefQ   Jul 8, 2008


It's a rainy day, and I just feel the pain,
Since you've been away it hasn't been the same,
Now this loneliness is taking hold of me,
And everything reminds me of what used to be.

I remember all the good times we had,
The times that we were never ever sad,
We used to lay in bed, silent-ly,
No words were to be said, between you and me
Just a simple wink could make you smile,
Those feelings then come back for a while,
And I rejoice with the thought of that good old time
But now I'm all alone and happiness is hard to find.

It's a rainy day, and I just feel the pain,
Since you've been away it hasn't been the same,
Now this loneliness is taking hold of me,
And everything reminds me of what used to be.

I still remember that twinkle in your eyes
And how I swept your tears when you cried,
I gave you the earth the sun and the moon
But the day you gave it back came too soon.
You lifted me to the highest plane,
Then you made me fall in vain,
And still I sit here reminiscing of us,
Thinking how I'd give it all to earn your trust, again...

It's a rainy day, and I just feel the pain,
Since you've been away it hasn't been the same,
Now this loneliness is taking hold of me,
And everything reminds me of what used to be.

Don't you worry about me, girl
I'll be alright, just wait and see, girl
All I need now is some time to take it slow
Don't blame me for that, it's hard letting you go

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It's actually a song on the guitar but still tell me what you think about this one, it's my first in a long time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This poem is so lovely n touching. I loved the metaphores created using the very apt 'rain' to relate with misery n grief. That was gr8.

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    I love this . Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyyContageous

    The first stanza captured my attention right away. The tale of a lost lover, an amazing poetry plot. I like how your world has becme dark and gray, as if she was your light. Beautiful. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bare My Paradox

    Hey nice one dude...incrediple flow...keep it up...btw... its true...