Hey nice one dude...incrediple flow...keep it up...btw... its true...

The first stanza captured my attention right away. The tale of a lost lover, an amazing poetry plot. I like how your world has becme dark and gray, as if she was your light. Beautiful. 5/5

I love this . Well done

This poem is so lovely n touching. I loved the metaphores created using the very apt 'rain' to relate with misery n grief. That was gr8.

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Fsams