A Dreamer

by Invited   Jul 8, 2008


A Dreamer
Dreams of paradise ,
One dreamer
Dreams of life.
If dreamers
Pictures faded blue
Then they would-
Dream of you.
A Dreamer
Dreams of fear,
That's true-
Because they are near.

Inspired by one who dreamed a dream too many!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Osita

    Very dreamy and very clever work

  • 16 years ago

    by The Prince

    Very unique and well written, and the message of the poem is made very clear! =D
    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kenny

    This one's short yet its thought is inspiring, I liked it ^^,

    5/5

    ~Kenny~

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    ~smile~ Hi there young friend. Your poem is not bad at all, but you could do away with all of the interpuction ( . , - etc) because that makes the poem look better;)
    I am giving you the highest rating!

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    I think this is a poem about how good dreams can fade and simplicity remains no longer but the unwanted dream. Overall, i am generally quite happy with my poem.

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