Against the odds

by FallingPieces   Jul 8, 2008


From the first hello you have catched my eyes
with time you stole my sole..
we promised each other eternity..
we straggled for happiness
we starved for our dreams to come true
but..
what we did not know that life had something different for our young souls
that what life does..takes who we love the most and leave our soul hollow

looking between my fingers now and not seeing your hands there to make me safe

my family wanted you far..
i guess they can live happily now..

they broke me
raped the life out of me
abused me

what life can i live with out him here
they say I'm young and foolish!!
who are you to judge my actions!

they say you don't know what true love is!
if this is not true love then what is?

they say move on,
live and forget,
it's not your decision to tell me what to do

if i could live eternity
i would like to live it with him

if he want my heart
i would reach for my chest and bring it for him..

don't tell me that i don't know true love
don't ignore what you can not explain
don't think with us far from each other going to stop us from loving each other

this is something you can't break or get rid of..
it's something true and here to stay

if we can't be together in life
death would be our ticket to be eternily free

" this poem for my bf who is now far from being in my arms..God knows how broken i am"..

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  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Hey a very complex poem, here and there, but great lines especially:
    they broke me
    raped the life out of me
    abused me.
    p.s i cannot believe how many people viewed this pem but didnt rate it or comment.
    keep writing. :)