Will you

by NicoleBaby101   Jul 8, 2008


If i walk away, will you fallow?

if i reach out my hand, will you come with me?

if i look into your eyes, will you look back?

if i smile, will you?

if i say "will you stay with me forever," will you say "forever and always"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Adam RIP Lesthat and Cody Hayden

    Tons of great questions in this poem. great job hun.5/5
    **lesthat

  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    This was extremely simple but extremely sweet - questions we all want answered in a new relationship. I loved it =)

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Oh i love this. its simple and sweet. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    These are very nice lines,I would like to see you expand on the imagery you have portrayed here.Maybe you could add a few more stanzas ,This could be a really great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Awwww cute! short and simple yet catchy very good! 5/5

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