Comments : Will you

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobody

    Awwww cute! short and simple yet catchy very good! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    These are very nice lines,I would like to see you expand on the imagery you have portrayed here.Maybe you could add a few more stanzas ,This could be a really great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by SoUrNameIsTia

    Oh i love this. its simple and sweet. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    This was extremely simple but extremely sweet - questions we all want answered in a new relationship. I loved it =)

  • Tons of great questions in this poem. great job hun.5/5
    **lesthat