by Nobody
Awwww cute! short and simple yet catchy very good! 5/5 |
by Deana
These are very nice lines,I would like to see you expand on the imagery you have portrayed here.Maybe you could add a few more stanzas ,This could be a really great write. |
Oh i love this. its simple and sweet. =] |
by S R P
This was extremely simple but extremely sweet - questions we all want answered in a new relationship. I loved it =) |
Tons of great questions in this poem. great job hun.5/5 |