Comments : Lets throw away the key

  • 16 years ago

    by Jeremy Howard

    I Love That Poem ANd i Also Love How U Make The Words Flow

  • 16 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    Now that was lovely i sang it all along :))

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Another wonderful poem
    i can relate to it some how
    i loved this one alot:
    "Its obvious I love you; It glows on my face.
    If I fall to hard will you ever change?"
    but the best part is the last:
    "Love cane be tricky; like holding a key to a locked door.
    You open it up to see whats inside.
    Sometimes theres to many secrets for love to survive .
    So how about if we throw away the key?
    Forget about the past so our love can be free.
    Thats when I'll see that you'll always be there.
    With out any heartaches, lies, or despair"
    you did a very good job in your poem, it's obvious it was from your heart