Wowza.. Such a powerful piece. I love the repitition of 'pretty pretty girl' gave it that eerie feel about it.

It's a sad topic, and I can totally relate to it, I guess lots of girls can. I'm putting this one in my favourites!

"can't you see you're damaged?
bandages and stitches only hold for a while"

^ I love that line, it's just so.. I don't know; powerful. That the safe things in life don't last, and the questions that you use are really effective.

Keep writing,
Take care,
Lizzy, xxxx

This is a beautiful poem, I love it.
Is it ment to be a song or anything? The flow reminds me of a song :]

It could be ... i dunno ... i just kinda .... wrote it in my sleep . :p

I agree with Nightmare Child...
5/5

Im dumb-founded... that was the poem of the day! Wow wow wow wow! Its raw and real! Loving it

Great Write

I love every line you have written in this poem.. Though I have never experienced anything like this I could feel the pain that flows through the poem!! GREAT JOB!