I like how you start this poem. A great image of a person screaming, but their efforts going unnoticed. This of course is more profound than just a scream, it surely a metaphor for actions of, maybe neglect of some description, spaning over many months, perhaps even years? The action of negelct, of not listening doesn't go without effect. You vividly describe the crying out for attention, courtesy of a blade, driven by an unfeeling heart, perhaps? Great title!!

Well done

Michael

This truly is a great poem. i enjoyed reading it very much. it's got a good meaning to it.
i absolutely love the title.
mia