Comments : Already There

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    The poem is too short but I cant describe how much I loved it...Few words included the pain u feel inside...This is awesome and this is the true talent..
    Keep up the good work..

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I think thats my que"
    `That's needs an apostrophe.
    `and, I think you meant cue instead of que.?

    There could be more to this poem because it is so short, but, I guess I see where you are going with this.. soo, nice job. But, I kind of wanted more? 4/5.