Good write...... 5/5 for this poem.......
keep writing

This was good, 5/5

Aawwww.......thats a strong and Very sweet poem and written excellently i realy love ir , so cute and full of true deep feelings and emotions and the words were so sweet =] great poem !! keep up the good work =] 5/5

Mmm nice one butt TOOO long for a poem ,

1 block poem is not recommnded i prefer you split them to stanzas ,

and work more on the rhyming

in overall , it si a great one speialy the explression and the story,

jsut work more on it

Great job! amazing work.