First of all, you tied this together beautifully. I really liked it. my question is...did you REALLY write it by candle light?

I cant see them
But I know they can see me

^^ Oh my goodness. I got shivers on this, actually. Because...like i said earlier..once a poet, forever a poet. because the words follow you. everywhere. HOLY COW. gorgeous.

^.^
Great job, babe.

Good job...The poem is well-written ,the flow was great and the idea was so perfect
Keep up the good work:)..