by Bugg Jul 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
She said she wanted to get high. |
by H E Losey
Very, very interesting format and the thoughts were ones that pique the mind. I would have preferred if they were all single lines and porportionately long which I think could be done. A very good read though. |
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh i loveddd ittt i swear |
by Fsams
Very nice story and love to read spoems that really convinces something. Of course your poem does. I particularly like the flow and the free style. |