She Said...

by Bugg   Jul 9, 2008


She said she wanted to get high.
He took her to the tallest hill in town.
She said she wanted to get drunk.
He got her a 12 pack of Pepsi and said, "Drink up."
She said she wanted to shoot herself in the face.
He gave her a water gun, aimed it at her face
And helped her pull the trigger.
She said she wanted to cut herself
He took a polariod, gave her scissors and
Had her cut it up.
She said she wanted to see her blood
He took her to get her ears pierced.
She said she wanted to cry herself to sleep
He had her watch a sad, romantic movie before bed.
She said she wanted to be alone.
He gave her a name tag that read,
"Hello, my name is 'Alone'.
She said that she wanted someone to care for her always.
He asked, "When am I not?"

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  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Very, very interesting format and the thoughts were ones that pique the mind. I would have preferred if they were all single lines and porportionately long which I think could be done. A very good read though.
    As always an opinion.

  • Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh i loveddd ittt i swear
    its sooo outstandinggg
    keep it up hun:)
    tc

    lili

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice story and love to read spoems that really convinces something. Of course your poem does. I particularly like the flow and the free style.

    I would suggest, if you dont mind, to structure your poem in stocks of stanzas.

    Tc
    Fsams