Irrational World

by BREEawNUHH   Jul 9, 2008


We're frozen in a delusional world;
no one wants to embrace what is unquestionable.
They refuse to accept the problems with this life;
because truth is what they fear the most.

We're locked in a fantasy world;
where we just ignore what is fact.
They turn down thoughts of anything wrong;
because reality is what they dread the most.

We're glued in a fictional world;
no one will tolerate honesty.
They ignore all of the dilemmas we face;
because actuality is what makes them shudder the most.

We're fixed in this irrational world;
nobody can handle the authenticity.
They deny what can be confirmed;
because truth is what they fear the most.

Briana Coulter
07/09/08

**Wasn't sure what to title this piece. Any ideas, let me know. :]

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Great word choice, it kept the reader very interested in the poem, great start and great finish!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    I never thought of the fact that people are actually scared of the truth! I definitely would agree with that statement. Well said! I loved the ideas in this poem. Great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    Oh, I really like the topic of this poem, and I think you did a good job of delivering it with your words, but the flow was a bit off in places.
    It could be better, but it's really good all the same.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I agree with all that this great free verse poem says. You really have the gift of poetry
    I love free verse but have not mastered it as you have
    5>>>>>

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Ok , let me say this i like the day you say in every paragraph a part where we live but
    it need more rhyming becasue it seem it si not rhyming and more the structure of the stanza in teh paragraphs are not the same ,

    i belve it is a good to start poem and a good topic but it need more work to be prefected

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