Kisses for a Midnight Rose

by StandStill   Jul 9, 2008


Twelve-oh-one wishes
Brushing lovers' closed eye-lids
Besos, dearest one.

**haiku: 5/7/5. Normally about nature, except for mine. :P**

Beso is the spanish word for "kiss" ((ug. i probably spelled it wrong....correct me?))

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  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Babby the teddy bear. I do believe you just wrote the only hiku I've ever enjoyed.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this piece, it's so beautifully breathtaking. You managed to express emotions fantastically within such short piece which left me in awe. I can't find anything to critique here, whole poem is truly amazing and memorable.
    Overall, this is very elegant and captivating poem.
    Greatly done.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    Ok, you said it, so I'm correcting you =P
    It's actually Besos, but you were close enough.

    By the way, I really like your haiku's, theyre really good, although they're really short poems they can have such huge meanings. This is my favourite one =)

    Keep writing! I want more =D
    Take care,
    xxxxx

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