Frozen

by J u l e s   Jul 9, 2008


You left me frozen
On my ocean of tears
I was left there bleeding
From all the pain in my years

You left me frozen
With my mountain of fears
Left there pleading
Because my life was unclear

*short yes I know but it means something to me*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Stanza..... its short. but i love it.....
    a good poem.... i had a good read...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxShadowxOfxYourxShadowxXMyxMiNdxIsxFrOzEnxX

    Short but awsome...I liked it alot...

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    I like this poem. very nice :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    I like this one. May be short, but it is also extremely deep and I find it very packed with emotion. Great write 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FallingPieces

    Gr8 poem ;)

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