by Goodbye
Excellent poem. People are living a hectic life nowdays. Specially in big cities.. Life is running from morning till late night.. Work, meetings, appointments, dates with your friend.. Your parents are phoning just when you are crossing the street with 2 bags on her hand and seeing finally your friend you didn't see for 2 months.. |
by BREEawNUHH
Ah, I liked this a lot. It's true -- people are too busy with their lives, schedules and things to think about the little things that matter the most. I really like your word choice in this piece. But, again, I feel like you should put a period on the end of the fourth line in each stanza if you do it once. However, it is still a good piece. |
That was really interesting n wonderful too.. |
Amazing as all your other poems. |
by Bugg
Perfect! I was feeling this way just this morning! Life is so hectic and people are frenzied, so they don't enjoy life as much as they should. Life literally will just pass you by if you let it. This poem was great and inspiring. |
by Sourav
This is a very good poem about an important aspect of our life. very relevant to today's life style. In this busy schedule of life we certainly do miss some important moments. Very well thought out... worth reading. |
I can totally relate to this poem. My daddy is like ALWAYS gone. Anywayy.. this poem was awesome. Very well written, 5/5 from me hunn. |
by Ash
I really love this poem. It has so much of meaning and gives even more depth to life as we're so caught up working or studying or in some sort of busy routine we never once stop to realise the moment that we're living in. |
Oh my. youve got a great word choice. i can feel those "missing moments" |
by Mr. Darcy
An excellently descriptive poem. I especially like the first line, the way you describe the raindrops hitting and splashing on the windscreen - just like they are dancing, tiny drops of rain going mad to the music - great image. |
by Cindy
RL |
by Lori
Beautiful work! I really love this poem! Its so peaceful and divine! Excellent! I also really love how its so deep and I do truly love how the reader can tell how much of yourself you put into this piece! Also, I love the stanzas... they support the word choice amazingly! |
I can deeply relate to this and I believe that a lot of people can. |
by HvN
Love it! You're such an amazing poet! |
I absolutely love this! It raises a very good point. We should really slow down and enjoy those moments we won't be able to later. Beautiful write, 5/5 |
5/5.An excellent write.Running in this vicious cycle of life,one is forgetting it's true meaning.Applause for your thoughtful message.Keep writing. |
by Becca
This is a great piece of poetry. I can definitely relate. I go to college and during school time it's so hard to find time for anyone else. It's hard to take a break and it gets frustrating and stressful. But during the school breaks I try to make time for everyone and sometimes they can't make the time so it's a vicious cycle. |
by LoreNz0
Really good once again, i sure no wht u mean... =) |
by gracey grey
You successfully captured all the hustle and bustle of life with a wonderful message. We do overlook nature and people we care about while scurrying hither tither in things which hardly matters.For we all know families and friends make the world go round. Will it be long before we realize life ceased before it even began???Wonderful write. |
by gracey grey
Wonderful poem with a strong message. We do tend to overlook nature, families and friends while scurrying hither tither for things which hardly matters. While neglecting that makes the world go round. |