by TravisInABottle Jul 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
*I know the title has been done and is over-used, but I never was good at titles anyhow. Just appreciate the work, not the title. ;) |
Almost an eerie write, especially with the way you ended it, it was feeling dark which is not what I was expecting when thinking of a muse. I really enjoyed and your choice of comparison, you had some really nice lines that stood out to me: |
Beautiful from start to end. This is my favorite... and titles do not make a poem, they are little glimpses into what the poem may hold. Don't worry too much, the poem has always made up for it in your case. |
by hippiehxc
I love it. :] |