Comments : Muse

  • 16 years ago

    by hippiehxc

    I love it. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Beautiful from start to end. This is my favorite... and titles do not make a poem, they are little glimpses into what the poem may hold. Don't worry too much, the poem has always made up for it in your case.

    Overall Rating: 6/6 (specialrating)

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Almost an eerie write, especially with the way you ended it, it was feeling dark which is not what I was expecting when thinking of a muse. I really enjoyed and your choice of comparison, you had some really nice lines that stood out to me:

    Blasphemous whispers in my sleep.
    You came to me like words, broken
    idols washing down brick walls,
    Like promises from my ear.

    Nice work, an enjoyable read.