Comments : Pass you by

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Great write. You did an amazing job with the flow and rhyme scheme. I dont see many poems in this format. I wish I could do so lol.

    And i am now bilingual and lying has become my language

    ^^My favorite of the entire poem

  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Wow...i LOVE this poem =) i love the rhyming and i just love the way you put it together...!

    i am goin' to add it to my favorites!