Wow
such magnificent poem
so deep, emotional and sad
the repetition "How do you do it, angel in disguise?
How do you go on hiding the lies?"
was so great and the questions inside the poem were so affective
i was touched by your poem

i hope you are doing well now
may Allah be with you

It is just another wonderful poem. the angel of disguise could be me. I can really call my self this name. I am really the pesron you are talking about.

A fantastic, sad poem...it really hurts, perhaps because i also feel the same way..but all in all it's great..

keep it up...

I dont normally put it this way, in all poetic terms that was a simply wonderful poem i was hooked and the way you ryhmed had me caught in every inch of the words. now for a reader im sorry to say i saw the ending coming not to say it was not great it was but alas i saw it coming. your a great author keep it up 5/5

Very impressive. I wasn't expecting the last three lines. I had this picture in my mind while I was reading it of this girl saying this to a beautifully stoic boy. Then reading the ending, and finding out you were talking to yourself, I felt a little twitch of unwarrented disappointment. It went away though, because I realized I was being ridiculous. I liked these lines best:
"Can anyone break the shield you have built over time? Or will you convict the one who tries for his crime?"
All in all, wonderful poem. It tugged heartstrings. Very poetic; rhymes were fantastic. The only thing I found wrong with it was a grammatical error. In the fourth line down, the first word is 'there.' It should be "they're." Other than that, which is a minor thing, I loved it. 5/5

Thanks for that comment and I change the grammatical error.