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by Pink Romance Jul 9, 2008 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
You see a girl seating on the street curve with tears running down her face. she is wearing rags and is all scared up, from left to right. blue eyed beauty, eyes so soft she can barely look away from hurt. innocent girl with pain and desire to do better. no ones there to care for her. hungry and sick no warm place to rest her aching head. her voice is so calm and sweet she shows no signs or revenge when she speaks. very caring and gentle you wouldn't think this would have happened to me. trying to do better in my education, and look what happened they screwed me over. only having a high school diploma, and no roof over my head simply because its too rich for my blood. seating here on the streets, and family too far to even help out. really all they care about is whats coming there way. thinking about ending it all, but cant cause i feel a miracle about to happen. seating here with volume in my hand thinking.... '' life just has to give me one more chance''. but when i look around all i see is failure and neglect. maybe my life hasn't begun yet, or my life was over just as fast has i fell on this curve. but at this point all i want is for god to look down and see me, and say '' come my child all your sorrows will be lift behind, come and smile to the end of time''.
by Ray Blue
Its true blue poem. I liked it. Nicely done. 5/5.