Your My Everything.

by M 4 Michael   Jul 9, 2008


Your my everything,
Without you i am nothing,
You lifted me up to the sky,
Then dropped me and lefted me to die,
Lol Now im gone,
And you still havent realise my love for you was strong,

To Be Honest... I Dont Know What Kind Of Poem Is This.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    I totally agree...take out the "lol" with it, it makes no sense in the emotions you express here in this poem and by the way...."Your" is actually spelled "You're" Practice on the grammar and the spelling of your poems. Otherwise this is a fairly good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I think you should take out the lol

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