BRILLIANT poem, I loved it hun and I added it to my faves :-) Short but so full of emotions and I can easily relate.....Brigthers days are yet to come, just wait and see :-)

Love you *Sabbi*

**Please no longer look at me
The way you always do
I think it's been made quite clear now
I could never be with you **

the last stanza was just breathtaking.. so much emotion could be felt..
as if you took the words from your heart. Exactly what you were feeling.
and as always , such a wonderful poem n_n

take care

Bravo!Bravo!I can relate to this as I am sure many others can.Your word choice was simply put and your flow was smooth and easy to read.5/5

-Amber-

Nice i know the feeling 5/5

Awww this poem is sooo sad and beautiful like all your other poems (:

Please don't say you love me
If you know it's just a lie
Please don't just hang around
It only makes me want to cry

^^
That line I can relate to and I'm sure others can too

Loved the read just wow!!!!

5/5 from me darl(:
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