Comments : Dancing Through Dewdrops

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Brings back such fond memories of vacations :)

    Embrace the sunlight, the sparkles on the grass
    There I am, dancing through dewdrops

    These lines are my favorites.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ur poem is so sweet...I feel like it spreads joy and happiness...and the choice of words was perfect
    Good job,keep it up:)..

  • 16 years ago

    by leinhart

    Hahah,,have a fun vacation!

  • 16 years ago

    by Phil

    I just love everything you write and you seem to just get better, great work .
    your good friend Phil

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I don't know why, but this poem just puts me in a state of euphoria. You have made this poem colourful with ur lively imagination. It really enable me to visualize as you dance through the rain drops. It was certainly a delightful to read.Keep it up

    Excellent job
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    "So I put on my pink little boots"..... I wish I also have one..lol!!! Cute piece!!! Really wonderful!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-