by xXxemzxXx Jul 10, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Jealousy |
I really liked this poem. I loved how you freely expressed your emotions. If I'm not mistaken, you're not straight. Which is fine, but it shows in this poem. And that's part of what I liked most about this poem. Great emotion... Keep up the good work! 5/5 |
by Vox
Very good poem, |
Very good poem short and sweet good job |
I know what you mean very well. I can quite relate. I liked your poem, it had nice flow but it was a little simple to me just my opinion however.^^ |