Comments : Fire and Ice

  • 16 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    I feel like I haven't commented your poems in forever! I'm sorry :( I missed your writing. This was amazing. The emotion was impecable (sp?). Anyway, if this is true...You're strong. I know you are. You can overcome anything. And of course, you can always talk to me. Great poem, love! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lori

    Omg...I love this one...its very expressive and packed with emotion. I also loved that it made the reader think about what your talking about when you say

    As Robert Frost once said
    He wished the world to end in fire
    However in my time of life
    I hold an opposite desire

    Yea that opening is pretty much AMAZING lol keep it up! I love reading your poetry... you are extremely talented raychil!! Beautiful work!
    <3 Loni