_aww.. this is really great.. I like it a lot.
I like this part:
About you
From all that I have seen
And from all that I have heard
Even before we met
I can't forget what I thought
You deserve everything
And you deserve so much more than me
Why can't you see
I really am nothing
I'm to goddamn empty
You deserve everything
You deserve so much more than me

I can feel the emotions in it., Keep up the good work!

Your poem is very well written and I liked it very much. The emotion in your poem is something that I surely felt...VERY intense.

Keep up the good work!! Again...I really liked it.

HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY!!