Burned

by Kait   Jul 10, 2008


It's still a wound, a cut.
It still hurts, still needs to be shut.
It's still open on my heart.
My whole world was torn apart.

Right now it's in pieces, and it won't go back together.
Did you ever stop to think, "This time I really hurt her."?
It will be hard to move on.
But, I'll be better off when you are gone.

You have no chance for goodbye.
Do not pretend to cry.
So, take your things and walk away.
This is the final price you pay.

You cheated and lied.
My broken heart you supplied.
I don't want to hear anything more.
Please just leave through the back door.

My heart is finally set free.
Took its chance to quickly flee.
My life has finally returned.
The memories of you, I have burned.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Right now it's in pieces, and it won't go back together.
    Did you ever stop to think, "This time I really hurt her."?"
    ``If I were you, i'd break both of these lines into two pieces, resulting in 4 lines.

    Well written. You showed in this poem that you are more than frustrated with this guy and want basically nothing more than him out of your face beacause he broke your heart and cheated and lied to you. Sorry to hear if you really went through this, because heartbreak is not the easiest. Well done expressing emotions though. 5/5. (:

  • 16 years ago

    by H E Losey

    Youo have penned some very insiteful words here, keep them running in your mind as you settle yourself from this . Your rhyme worked well and your metre'/rhythm is improving.

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