Snobious the Greatest

by Goodbye   Jul 10, 2008


Prouder than others
he sits on the mountain so high
He is looking down at the people
His eyes are sparkling
when He is pouring hot water
on peoples face

Starred flag is swaying in the wind
He is sitting down on his throne
The crown on his empty head is heavy

He is the judge of the judges

He is Snobious the Greatest

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This poem is fictional. I saw a dream about a blue monster and this poem is describing it the blue monster in my dream.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wat a dream.......;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Just noticed your new poem. Well... it's all about fiction! Well written...

    As far as the structure is concerned it's very good. Well measured lines with good flow.

    Nice to read a short and straight poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Hmm intresting piece of writing.... excellent... 5/5