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by Invited Jul 10, 2008 category : Life, society / other
The air makes me airsick The people make me homesick! The dogs make me dogsick And the vehicles make me carsick The roads are too long The people and I don't get along! The dogs bark all night long This is where I just don't belong. I miss all my tall trees And Nana's fresh brownies I miss the soft breeze Which dances with the leaves. I miss my bedroom And through the window I'd watch fuchsias bloom- I miss my toy-filled playroom. (A true story in which I had to leave my home that I grew up in since childhood)
by Mister 47
Wow a great one too you have talent girl good structure and good rhyming too , and the expression was very clear
by Aish
Must have been a horrible expoerience for you!!! Are you really only 12 years old? Very good writing!!! Aish xx