I've become the bully

by Invited   Jul 10, 2008


I sat upon the table
gossiping to a friend.
But then she said-
This has to end.
You've become the bully
Someone that's despised ;
You may not see it in your eyes.
But you've become the bully!

The rights you said you'd fight,
You may have been right.
But you hurt the people who cared...
Then everyone stared
tears filled my eyes.
That was a surprise!
For the bully had cried
And for that I sighed.
I'd become the bully!

A moral should be learned
You should be concerned.
For being mean is obscene
And friends could be lost;
and that would cost.
Don't become the bully!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Their is somthing very good in your writing you liek to tell the epxression in good wrods , but you forget the structure and the rhyming , even the poem is plit to paragraphs it si not enough , it need more

    good work ,

    we ca all be the bully girl , dont take it to the heart someday you will do it to toehr too

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    This one had some good points. I liked the message.

  • 16 years ago

    by Addicted to You

    Wow your a really good poet good job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    We all are the bully at some time Chinwe...it cannot be helped. We all make mistakes and when someone is a real friend he or she will point it out to you and then you can apologize and forget about the mistake;)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid
    ps: Your writing seems to be improving with every poem! Keep on the good work:)

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