by Ingrid
We all are the bully at some time Chinwe...it cannot be helped. We all make mistakes and when someone is a real friend he or she will point it out to you and then you can apologize and forget about the mistake;) |
Wow your a really good poet good job! 5/5 |
by Becca
This one had some good points. I liked the message. |
by Mister 47
Their is somthing very good in your writing you liek to tell the epxression in good wrods , but you forget the structure and the rhyming , even the poem is plit to paragraphs it si not enough , it need more |