Comments : I've become the bully

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    We all are the bully at some time Chinwe...it cannot be helped. We all make mistakes and when someone is a real friend he or she will point it out to you and then you can apologize and forget about the mistake;)

    Hugs,

    Ingrid
    ps: Your writing seems to be improving with every poem! Keep on the good work:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Addicted to You

    Wow your a really good poet good job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    This one had some good points. I liked the message.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Their is somthing very good in your writing you liek to tell the epxression in good wrods , but you forget the structure and the rhyming , even the poem is plit to paragraphs it si not enough , it need more

    good work ,

    we ca all be the bully girl , dont take it to the heart someday you will do it to toehr too