Comments : Rhythms of Speech

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    "The teacher will pass, the student will teach"

    I love that line. Maybe it's because my mom is a principal. lol I love how your poems always have a spiritual undertones. Dunno if that's really what I should call it, but I think you know what I mean. I really enjoyed reading this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fantasy

    I like how your poems are so realistic, they put the found picture in your head. And how you add so much detail to your writing is inspirational. You are a very good writer.
    Check out my writing, vote/comment.
    Taylor.

  • 16 years ago

    by Montgomery

    Succinct, clear, cool and crisp. Profound, inviting, hard to resist. Rythym, cadence, rolling in time. All fit together with tailor-made ryhmes.