Lost

Aw, even though it's just one stanza, it's amazingly beautiful and simple. You only needed that one stanza to convey a deep sense of loss and loneliness. It was really good.

Short, but you definatly got to the point very quickly. Again, excellent word choice.. I hate to make this short, but it was that good. 5/5.

Short. sweet. to the point. but also very good. it holds a lot of emotion for something so short. i hope you find what you crave and that there is a lighthouse to guide you home agian. (lol)
5/5