Comments : Lost

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Short. sweet. to the point. but also very good. it holds a lot of emotion for something so short. i hope you find what you crave and that there is a lighthouse to guide you home agian. (lol)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Short, but you definatly got to the point very quickly. Again, excellent word choice.. I hate to make this short, but it was that good. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    Aw, even though it's just one stanza, it's amazingly beautiful and simple. You only needed that one stanza to convey a deep sense of loss and loneliness. It was really good.