Very beautiful lines, there was a wonderful flow to this poem and the rhyming was wonderful as well. Good job. 5/5. |
by Bugg
Beautiful! Everything was so perfect. I loved this, especially because I love children. This was so cute and to the point. I don't read poems to point everything that's wrong, I read them for enjoyment and emotion. This one gave me everything I wanted out of a poem. :) |
by momopixie18
Oh so cute, yes a child is proof of love, beautiful poem |