One day

by Ingrid   Jul 10, 2008


One day the blinders will come off,
all will become clear
Your quest will come to an end
on the realization that love was always here

You will see things
as they really are and know
Love is not some unreachable ideal,
you did not wait in vain for it to show

That blessed day you will see
Gods presence in all that surrounds you
Realizing love is not to be searched for
but there in all we see and do

The world will seem to have
a second layer and present itself in all its beauty
The poison will finally leave your heart,
put there so long ago relentlessly

You will know you had it all along
It was your conviction of being undeserving of such luck
standing between you and true fulfillment
Loneliness will prove to be an illusion and life will no longer suck

Dedicated to my friend, stand up guy Bob Shank aka Sluvious.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    That lovely piece of poem is really somthing i hope for my lover ,

    hope that he see th true love , adn that love was alwasy here,

    how a happy thought you have , simple but yet unreachable in real life maybe , for most of us ,

    in all the poem structure could be more good , i felt it abit weaker in structure than the your previous ones, !!

    great feeling flow , adn idea jsut amaize more adn more

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Great flow, very well written. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Beautiful write. I loved the ending. As inspiring and as mesmirizing as it was, I still care to re-read it. :) I hope you write more soon. :) Take care!

    5/5

    Bri~

  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Sensational. I just love it. Your poetic device is amazing. I love the structure.
    Well Done, Ingrid. I hope to see more.

    ~Chinwe~
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