Wow, this poem is really touching.For many times I tought about killing my self, but I have never had the courage to do this.
Dear friend, I am ready to be the one who can feel your pain and share your feelings with her.
well done 5\5.

I can relate.
Such a depressing poem though.
So, I can't really downpour all my emotions in a comment.
I'm .... happy you're able to get your emotions out instead of hiding.
Poetry seems to work for you.
Keep up the good work.
5/5

It was so sad n deppressive dark one...

It was also different from ur other writes..

Good poem from one of my favourites...

Though this was good n it really scared me n not of my choice... but liked it..

Keep it up..

Best wishes

I love this poem you are a really great poet

This is really good, I love it!

I just don't like this type of 'cutting nerve' poems. But I did read this one and found it very emotional and depressive. Some lines are good. Some are little common. All of all a good one...

I really liked this it was really good.keep up the great work

Dam that deep

So dark n vivid! I have read few dark poems n I found this one v nice. It seems so true n the flow is great. 5.5

Wow intense. Thanks for the comment on my poem just wanted to return the favor.

This was painful for me to read but it is well written
my favorite line is I am shattering in front of you, is that Okay?
i really hope that things get better for you
keep up the good work
:)

Dude I dont blame you about the soul. Sure life sux. but either way we have to move on. Life is so sweet.Which it's so sentivite. love it (^_^) 5/5