Snow storm

by Lauren   Jul 11, 2008


Snow falling down,
Silent, without a sound,

Shaped by angel hands,
Showering the earth with blankets of white crystals,

Sinking to the ground,
Showing no signs of cease,

Shamelessly it steals the heat,
Setting across the towns, white sheets,

Sneaking in with flurries, winter now,
Shows all of its fury,

Slowly it finally halts,
Sunlight has reached it's peak,

Snow starts to melt,
Sliding out of ice, the grass slowly appears.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is really good, and I like your style too! It's cool how you started every line with an s too.

    "Shaped by angel hands,
    Showering the earth with blankets of white crystals,"

    ^I loved that line, so perfect!!

    "Sliding out of ice, the grass looks meek."

    ^That line just seems a bit weak for the ending.

    Maybe try this:

    "Sliding out of ice, the grass slowly appears.

    Or something like that, just an opinon.

    But still, I loved this a lot, so keep it up! :)

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