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by Poet on the Piano
This is really good, and I like your style too! It's cool how you started every line with an s too. "Shaped by angel hands, Showering the earth with blankets of white crystals," ^I loved that line, so perfect!! "Sliding out of ice, the grass looks meek." ^That line just seems a bit weak for the ending. Maybe try this: "Sliding out of ice, the grass slowly appears. Or something like that, just an opinon. But still, I loved this a lot, so keep it up! :)